scrip writing is... omg! keep rewriting!!!!

Keep rewriting my story while doing the scrip. It's not a concept story anymore, getting form into the serious format.

Feel like a new baby is coming. wahhaha! :P

The The idea is still the same, about a uni student's pay to his obssession of dowloading movies. But during the writing, many things starts getting in their place, and many more things have to be considered,..

-timing: the time of the film (3 min), the length of peopl's conversation...etc.

-action description: better to be short, sharp and right tothe point, but can also construct the atmosphere of the environment, and the emotions of a person.

-direction: Character's walking path, and the path of camera. The relative location and direction of the furniture, in order to construct a concrete image for the readers.

-lighting: sunilght? table lamp? dawn, or just natural light at teh day time?


During the rewriting process, i feel like i'm getting into the story, like i'm standing right at the scene, which is good because i can kind of enjoying creating my own world. But i'm also worry that it may not be clear enough for others, or too over describe to others.

I keep asking myself would the actions or dialogue be described tooo much, tooo details? or it's not enough informations.

Let's pray that everything would make sense and easy for others to read then....