would it works?

=Some adjustments and possible 'ending'=

Adjustment:

* Add in the homie image of Tom at the begining of the film, and to construct his obsession of downloading movie and crazy for the new youtube and online movie.

e.g.

* Tom sitting in fron of his lab top concentrately and can't-be-interrupt. Msn messenger's binbon sounds keeps buzzing, with the movie downloading window on the screen (of lab top).

* Tom's mobile rings, his friend asking him to go out for the movie "The Devil wears prada"

"Oh no no no! (dramatic facial expression ) Don't be silly! No one pay for 15 box to watch movie at cinema today, man! Watch downloads!!"

"But i prefer the atmosphere of cinema, though." friend A said.

"Come on, I don't want to waste my money on that. I would rather download the movie and watch it at home, You want a copy of that? I will download it right now."

"umm... alright then. Burn me one copy as well. thanks" friend A said.

Tom hang off the phone and his hand back to the mouse, click and search.
Screen (of lab top) shows theprocess of download.

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Ending (will be put in after April turn her head towards the camera):

* Tom's mobile rings again, friend A called.

"Hey! have you burned me the movie yet? " said friend A

Tom picks up the phone, staring at the screen shocked,couldn't get back to self.

“Umm...“ "Umm... I think it's better to watch it at the cinema, isn it? eheheh..." (laughing bitterly and awkward)

"Alright, Tom. up to you then, you are such a changable guy." Friend A said.

fade in black, text on: "Life would be more happliy forever if you go to cinema!" OR "Let's go to cinema!"

ends-